All Comments on 'Ana & Carla'

Very erotic. Can't wait for chapter 2.

Five stars

No remedial English required. That alone sets it apart from so many of what is on literotica.

Not only that but also, in a story of less than 3500 words, you've included all the necessary ingredients and produced a tale that is enjoyable to read.

Yup, I do so enjoy your writing. Keep it up.