All Comments on 'Anal Adventures of a Redheaded Slut'

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TFSallyAnneTFSallyAnne8 months ago

Wonderful story, wonderful feeling isn't it Cheryl?

Rainyday493Rainyday4938 months ago

Awesomely sexy, so hot.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I liked it the first time when you posted pet of under the title discovery.

DazmanDazman8 months ago

Great story.

21stcv21stcv8 months ago

you need an editor, too many wrong words and misspellings

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago
What made ME cringe was

"The end of so many things has we both prepared..."

It's has US both prepared! This was just the worst one -- you really need an editor!

Only three stars as a result -- otherwise would have been four.

lostopportunitylostopportunity8 months agoAuthor

thank you for the wonderful feedback love Cheri XOXO

JSA69JSA698 months ago

Thank you for a VERY hot story. Yes, you could use an editor for grammar and spelling, but anyone who can write a sentence like "My legs trembled, my knees shake, my head is spinning, my body falling off a cliff into a pile of tingling ecstasy" can be my favorite self-love author any day. Whew! What a nasty little mind you have!

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