by lostopportunity
"The end of so many things has we both prepared..."
It's has US both prepared! This was just the worst one -- you really need an editor!
Only three stars as a result -- otherwise would have been four.
Thank you for a VERY hot story. Yes, you could use an editor for grammar and spelling, but anyone who can write a sentence like "My legs trembled, my knees shake, my head is spinning, my body falling off a cliff into a pile of tingling ecstasy" can be my favorite self-love author any day. Whew! What a nasty little mind you have!