by Neon_Ultra
I thought for sure I knew where 7 would go after reading six. Ha. This was a nice detour. Thanks for bringing it together. I know you’re busy, but please I don’t wanna wait a year for 8. Pretty please.
Hello! It's me again, the guy who keeps leaving very long comments on your stories. I'm very glad to see that you are still committed to the series. However, I'm not sure what to make of this installment. I noted previously that act 06 was not my favourite and that I thought that your installments were getting repetitive without maintaining the same quality. I appreciate that you went in a new direction with this episode. Kudos for that! Unfortunately it sacrifices the tone of the series too much for my tastes. I'm in the series for Alice's cluelessness specifically towards her brothers and her incestuous relationship with them. The best installments in my mind have had one on one scenes with the brothers. This non-incestuous (and much more gratuitous) gang rape scene doesn't carry the same appeal for me. I understand that I am asking a lot, both for new material that somehow sticks to the same characters and subject matter, and so I hope you so not receive this as a condemnation but rather as an open expression of how I feel about this installment. Despite my grievances with (as it seems to me) this black-sheep installment, I still think this is a good story overall, but not an excellent "Anal Alice" story. Overall, good job on expanding with new characters and reaching into new territory. It's just not entirely my thing.
i wonder if he was big enough to straighten the curve between alice's rectum and colon
the time between chapters is slow but like a finly cooked steak its good and juicy and keeps me satisfied until the next one comes about
Amazing work, waiting so long to get to read this chapter. Plz don't stop now and continue this story, and let me tell you that it's indeed the best story ever written in the field of erotica.
Though I've an advice, I think it'd be proper if you can bring a slight difference to the theme and change the R scene into more like guys seducing and convincing Lisa to enjoy the depths of her backdoor with their huge dicks.
Now waiting patiently for the next chapter 🙏
Anal is not really my scene but goddamn I effing love this series , I don't know why her cluelessness turns me on even more . So thank you , keep it up and be safe
i juste hope she got her revenge, like, idk anal alice strapon revenge.... Mouhahahaha!
God i hope dad is next, her naive innocent clueless consent but not consent with daddy is going to be amazing
Please please please pleeease continue. I cant take the wait aby longer, your stories are the best. I dont want them to end. I wish her dad would fuck her in the ass, but not rape like, still keep her naive and dumb, but play up the daddy's girl persona. Make it like she get tricked into sucking his dick and takunf it in that ass
I love you neon, been following you forever, hope you're new writing gig is working out
Thank you all, I'm so pleased you enjoy this series!
Once again I'm terribly sorry for the aeons-long wait, but hopefully you can forgive me after I tell you Act 8 is finally submitted!
There may be some disappointment - I think what most of you want to happen, hasn't (not yet) - but hopefully enough of you like it anyway, despite it delving further into the fucked-up themes present in this part. I'm expecting to lose as many readers as I'll gain. But we'll see. I'll pay attention to the responses to see how it goes down.
If you don't like the next part, stick around anyway. Act 9 might satisfy you...
a shame that she got large boobs but they are barely touched. not any titfuck so far or even sucking of her boobs
Seems as if there is problem with the story being submitted maybe? Going on 8 days now. What torture 😩.
I don't know Anon, I'm waiting as impatiently as anyone! I don't know why it's taking so long, it's stuck in Pending :( Keep checking.
I feel like there’s a problem with the submission process, since it’s taken almost two weeks now
Looking on the Lit forums, seems other people have their stories stuck in pending for ages, too. I PMed about it but got no response. Will just have to hold out, annoyingly. Sorry everyone.