All Comments on 'Anal At Last Ch. 14'

Excellent. Keep it coming.

I've been loving the development of this story until that last scene. What came before, Angela getting plowed in the ass while they watched the cam video, that was hot, perhaps the best scene in this excellent screen play you've been writing. The dildo DP was great too. Him jacking on the babysitter in the dark though was just too pervy, I had an "ick" response. I know you had him come on the bed rather than on her which was wise, but the whole scene, it was more a "flasher in a raincoat" vibe than seduce the nubile".

I hope you develop the subplot of Angela taking his ass. Pegging is one of the best developments in porn recently. There's no reason why women would like it in the butt any more than men. If this story shows how virile hetero men can like it in the ass too that would be great.

Finally, I do hope that when Sam gets her first it isn't like she becomes a gaping anal whore within minutes. The virgin asses of women I've had took lot's of patience, LOTS of lube, and tender appreciation of their whole bodies. I'm sure it will be great though, as this story has been really good. I've had great fun stroking while reading along. Now if only I could get my wife to let me plow her ass while we watch a vid.

I have to say this chapter left me rather disappointed. While the first half of the chapter was good, the second half between you and Sam was way below from what I had been expecting. You were talking about how that this was gonna be the chapter where you and Sam finally get together and the category for the chapter was even first time ( where nothing happened for the first time except Andy jacking off over Sam which was as the previous poster said kinda like a creepy stalker). I really hope the next chapter will be better....I gave it a 50% because I only liked 50% of the story, the other 50% could use some work

I have been following each install and was impressed until the last one. The scene with Andy and Ang watching the computer screen was very erotic. Unfortunately, the end part of the installment was a bit of a let down. I was looking forward to the main character finally getting it together with Sam but the groping under the bed sheets was a little creepy and seemed to me out of character. Still I look forward to chapter 15.

While the overall series is excellent, I agree with the sentiments of those before me that this was pervy and out of character for your protagonist. Maybe you could have a confrontation between he and Sam to resolve this issue? Something about how she knows what he did and he has to work to earn her trust again? Just a thought.

I'd really hate to see you end this story. I have your submission page bookmarked to get each new chapter!

I'm dying to read the next installment - it has been great up til now, but I can't wait to read about him finally taking Sam's anal virginity!

The disappointment wasn't in the hero's nightime adventure with Sam--she is clearly interested in him and is perfectly happy spying on him when she thinks he isn't aware--so there is absolutely no problem with the hero coming onto Sam when she is pretending (which she clearly was) to be asleep. That effectively gave permission for the feeling up and jacking off.

What would have been out of character would have been for Sam to have been pushed past that point into actual intercourse against her will. Of course, she needs to be conscious, cooperating, and consenting for her deflowerment, whether vaginal or anal...

This was just more of the pattern of turning up the erotic heat until Sam gives herself away!

And that's what we need next! Please continue this great story, with its interesting cast of characters and situations. New! Chapeter! Now!

I hate stories when a couple says I love you, but they fuck different people. In fantasy it's Ok, but then again in fantasy you might enjoy a 3 headed monster or a rape. In reality I have never seen it work. A friend of mine ( a couple, married) brought in girls into their bedroom and the husband fell wife's best friend. Needless to say the new couple aren't so open and have been together. Another couple brought a girl in and the man couldn't handle that a woman made his woman cum quicker. They broke up! Couldn't stop fighting about it even though it was his idea. Another married couple who had an open relationship broke up as well. I don't know one couple who have done that and are still together. I think if you have to bring in a third person into the bedroom obviously it's a sure fire sign the sex ain't good anymore or something else is lacking. I think some fantasies should be just that, a fantasy.