All Comments on 'Anal Train Ride, Give and Receive'

Unbelievable. A story has to at least be believable. The character dialogue is unreal, nobody talks like that. Keep trying.

Complete and utter rubbish As anon said - A story has AT LEAST to be believable - Yours isn't.

Dialog was bad broken English. People don’t talk like this. It was like they were having conversations with voiced in their heads not each other.

Vaseline is pure oil, it will ruin silicon and TPE sex toys if used as a lubricant. It works with glass, metal, very rigid plastics like ABS. Those aren't often used for strap-ons and dildos. The heroine suggests using vaseline for strap-on penetration she's a fan of. Does she not know? Haven't she had issues with that combo?