All Comments on 'Anatomy of the Heart'

the story just jumps places without telling you and it's confusing, also i feel like there's a lot of backstory i should probably know

Absolutely adorable. You don’t see much intimacy or romance in bdsm stories, and I appreciate how much of a focus it is here

This story was sooooo incredibly amazing. 99% stories where a femdom starts talking about cuckolding, you just can feel and see she's a selfish uncaring person and would easily hurt him with that. This one... somehow the author managed to make it so crystal clear she's ALL about not hurting him FIRST, and cares about him deeply, not about herself and what he can do for her. 100 stars out of 5. I'm 99% Dom myself, but on those super rare occasions where I imagine what it would be like to submit to a woman, the heroine of this story is pretty much who I imagine as a perfect woman to partner with. THANK YOU author.

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@redder - sorry, no idea what you mean. The story is pretty obvious and clear. If you have specific unclear parts, like maybe ask specifics so people (or author) can explain.