by buckneckid2000
*4 - too short a segment to get a *5! Loved the quick departure from feeling guilty. Glad you put in the BITCH's lack of sexuality, except on her terms! Maybe we'll understand why you chose to make this part so short when we read the next PART! Us ol' farts are loving this fantasy!!!!
What a great story so far .. he’s living the dream ! Can’t wait for more ! Thanks
*****Two for Two great start great follow-up. Looking forward to the continuation. Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.
What a good story to start this chitty 3 years of covid. At least now I have something to fantasize about. I love this story so far. Being an old fart myself... This story hit so may strings, I could make a good song. Please keep going, it is definitely a 5 for both chapter. You have a Fan here. And a Happy New Year to you !!!
Wish that old guy was me! Enjoying this story greatly! 5***** and keep going.
Fun little story. But he seems to be doing the Grand Loop backwards. Heading down river after Memorial Day to New Orleans, it will be hotter than Hell when he gets there. Cant wait for more, maybe he'll fix his course, and head north into the Great Lakes for the summer, makes a lot more sense.
I said "Keep up the good work" in my comment on your previuos chapter and, bugger me, you've improved!!
I too like the story. My question/comment: I've never boated on The Mississippi but I don't believe you can navigate a big river without the engine. Without forward speed it is impossible to steer.
2 chapters in the first 24 hours- looking forward to a nice leisurely cruise!