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by bb1212

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Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Loved it as it ticks all the boxes

April Fool - check

Cheat done over - check

Revenge - check

Justice - check

Humour - check

Sex - check

Love and even romance - check

And a lot more

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Rock On

Literotica is great, and I've read plenty here, but I have to say that, as far as I'm concerned anyway, this just has to be the greatest Literotica story ever:-)

Ashesh9 about 5 years ago

My Vote for the April First challenge winner is bb1212 for.......

'& all the benefits it may bring..."

P.S.: didn't know Yoko was evil!!!????

ender2k2k about 5 years ago

That was wonderful

Thank you. Good luck with the contest.

AnnaValley11 about 5 years ago

You're good at Romance

Clever story, great characters and justice prevails.

Just right

Thank you

Skubabill about 5 years ago

Really good story

This was a good warm story. You have my vote.

Spencerfiction about 5 years ago

Nice April Fool on Evil Eva

Really enjoyed this, it rocked and rolled. 5*

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

What the heck!

True enjoyable story, just right reading for a rainy spring day.

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Brilliant

Only a 5 wish I could have given it a 10.

The story had it all!

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Loved the story, wished it was longer!

Birdstheword1 about 5 years ago

Well done

It would be an awesome on going series if you shared their journey as a band .

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Very, very good.

I was wary at first when the protagonist stated the need for some backstory, as this can be a rocky way of introducing information that might better flow into the story naturally. But after that -- wow! The temporal back-and-forth, the exquisitely laid out vengeance explained only at the end, and just the right touch of eroticism (the details of which reflect my own preferences) make this a real winner. Congratulations!

DogFuzz about 5 years ago

Oh Yeah

Thanks, you got a ton of smiles from me.

subtlekiss about 5 years ago

An interesting read

A great story!

Good luck and I hope that you go far with this story to win the April Fool's contest :)

UltimateHomeBody about 5 years ago

Huh

Guess I live under a rock

rescatooor about 5 years ago

Very nice story.

I found the dates a little confusing at the beginning. Maybe next time you could put the date in cursive or bold? I know it's a nit-picky thing but it might help dummies like me who just read the date as if it was part of the scene. Other than that it was a sweet strong for the romantics. Well done. (Also I thought I already sent this comment before so if this comes out twice, forgive me.)