by endthedream
...or constructive, don't comment! In my opinion, readers shouldn't come to this particular genre if they know they won't like it. I'm a straight woman & happen to like some of the stories in this genre - including this one. Yes, it's a bit more descriptively detailed than I normally like but it looks to me like the storyline is starting to come together. Ignore the naysayers & keep up the great work!