All Comments on 'Andee in Las Vegas'

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bgtrkdrvrbgtrkdrvrover 16 years ago
Great Job

Very erotic, and very well written. Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Excellent

Apparently some "readers" have issues with well written, well thought out erotica. This is an excellent submission and I look forward to more about this character

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
GREAT STORY

What a hot story. Hopefully you won't wait as long to publish more. By the way I have to ask, is it something that happened or is your imgination just that dammed good? let me know at hotdana@cs.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
very good

Very good story. I get the impression that she could have been "set up" on this. I'm also looking forward to reading what happens next with this theme.

roscovichroscovichabout 13 years ago
Oh daddy,can I have a camel ride ?? Can I... can I.. ?

Sorry baby, this animal is stupid and unpredictable ! No !

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
4***** story! Well written! Original and Creative!

I would have rated it 5***** except 8" cocks are so rare that it makes the story far less believable. a 7" cock, about 1 in 25, would be much more realistic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
DWmoroncok is the cock expert

After so much ATM you can say the knowledge is 'first hand.'

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Daddy... daddy... can I have a camel ride? Can I..can I..??

Baby,this animal is stupid and vicious. No!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Another Favorite!

I have never been to Vegas! Now I really want to go to Vegas! :-)

LuvShowinHerOffLuvShowinHerOffover 10 years ago
Hot story

Hot story .. thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Oh, Yes!!

Thank God for stupid, sissy-pervert husbands who let their wives fuck around! I just love fucking married women - their cunts are so hot and they want that cock so badly they almost throw their hips out trying to work you inside!! Hmmmm!

26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago

Cucks and their whores do Vegas. Lame,overused plot to turn a wife into a whore.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

WHAT is Husband's Name ? Caused confusion as don't believe story ever says. Very Good otherwise

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