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I had to rewrite this chapter twice. The original doesn't work for Lit, and the first rewrite was a bit too dark and surreal (I don't know what the hell I was thinking), but this version worked for me.

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Originally I wrote these chapters weekly for my sub-page, nothing planned and notes taken as I wrote with the idea that it could be a never ending, 2-thousand word, weekly "journal." We'll see how it goes. I plan to expand some of the later Timmy vs Wrestling MILF chapters that I had to shorten due to closing my sub-page, but all in good time. I'm in no rush.

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I start introducing Timmy with is mother in #14. Abbey's POV comes back in #19 & #20, though I might combine those chapters, and Timmy starts helping his teammates' mothers seduce their sons in #23

Thanks. I love this story. Please keep writing.

I hope you will continue with this journal. Thanks.

@Cajun Tim ---- Thanks

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@ Southpaw ---- I wrote the journal for my ex-subscription page. I have twenty-six entries complete/86-thousand words done. The problem is that I have to revise each chapter before posting it to Lit. Some of the later chapters can be expanded since I was rushing to finish them before shutting down my subscription page. I decided it would be easier to post the story by chapter than edit 86,000 words all at once.

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The downside is that I think the series is getting less love because of the format. That's life, though, but that also doesn't give me an incentive to hurry up and post it. I have other things I'm working on, so revising the Anderson Family Journals is a side project rather than a priority.

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I plan to finish this series at my leisure.

Fuckkkk, that was uber-hot.

The imagination is a wonderful thing.

Would be nice to have like a full blown story on this instead of an excerpt. (or maybe not)