All Comments on 'Andi and the Unruly Class Ch. 01'

You have a delightful way of 'dropping' crumbs....and all lead to ever-increasing exhibitionism and submission....Dave, Ave's Dad, the strip club, the class (together and alone, boys and girls), the Deputy Head.... All the while, Miss Kay teaches, the Seniors excel (inviting better and even more deliciously mortifying rewards, yes?) Keep up the series!! BRAVO!!

Miss Kay seems to have caved to everything a little too easily, and perhaps not with enough Sturm und Drang? There could have been a lot more angst and worry about what she was doing, instead of just glee. Plus, one or two girls who did not go along but were horrified by the goings-on might have added some drama, and led Dave and a couple of his friends to "convince" them to go along; then Miss Kay could have suspected what was happening to the dissenting girls, and well, you get the idea. All that said, this was excellent, well written, and a ton of fun, and five stars from me. -- JB Edwards

PS: My favorite scene was in the classroom with Mr. Cosgrove there, while Miss Kay daringly exhibited her breasts to the students, while hiding them from the administrator.

The first 2.5 pages was some of the best I have ever read, but the dad and everything else was very rushed. Should have let it simmer a little more , too early to go out of school . He control going away should have been natural (she shouod have been more hesitant,more fightback from her. a great story, nevertheless.

What a wonderful story! Looking forward for more!

Great story, really enjoyed it!

5 stars!

I hate it when these type of stories are not updated regularly. Kindly update asap

I would have preferred to have her forced to reveal her sexual neediness to her students bit by bit; 1st by having her go without any underwear at all for a week, as a result of having disobeying her 'Master's orders, then having to teach class for the next week completely in the buff, but only for the final period. Bringing in the Father/Authority figure so soon seemed a bit rushed, especially when she was so prepared to give control of herself over to her students anyway. I also would like to see how she might have reacted to having to expose herself in public, but still under the control of David and the other students. Oh, well, perhaps in the upcoming chapter(s). This has the potential to be a mini-novella!

YOMEYO

I have enjoyed it ever since the first lines: your story kept its promises until the end of this first chapter. I look forward to reading the sequel

Great pace and visual. it is always difficult to paint a picture that is easily digested and followed, so great job. I found myself eagerly devouring the story and wanting to read more.. you will have to let me know when you finish the continuation

I'm definitely looking forward to more.

This story was so good! I love the seeds you have sown that suggest a complicated future for Andrea. Here's hoping you continue and show us how she balances her career as a teacher with her obviously true calling...

Life as Dave's pet is just one part of that... I'm wondering what Dave's father would do having seen such talent. Maybe a very different career beckons?

Dying to read 2nd part

Update the 2nd part asap

Tragic that this has no part 2 yet.

Fantastic story loved the gradual buildup the description of how you are ordered to dress .

Especially like the consensual humiliation aspects of the story and your real desire to please I look forward to reading more of yours