All Comments on 'Andi's Summer - Day 02'

One of the better reads I have had the pleasure to enjoy! I commend the author on his writing ability and attention to detail. My only regret is that Chaper 2 didn't include 'Roxie's' visit to Mr. Cooper's store as their experience in Chapter 1 was so sexually tantalizing. I hope the author continues with that story line.

Of all the stories I've read on this site, this is by far the best. The characters are ingesting, good dialogue, hot scenes. Ands it's really interesting, unique, well written! You should consider becoming a pro writer if you haven't already.