All Comments on 'Andrea, From Homeless to Happy'

Good story!

5

Grim and compelling and very readable. A well-written piece of work.

Rather disgusting piece of work; but well written...and given the call that you are responding to, it fits the feminist empowerment motif that at least you attempt to transcend...

4 stars.. for your standard exceptional writing even in a trite motif.

to servant111; being homeless is not fun and at least they all lived happily ever after.

Thank you for participating in my event!

You had inaccuracies concerning female biology and childbearing, and another round of editing might have been in order, though on the whole you write well. If you want more detailed criticism, PM me - I’ve been told I’m too blunt and should critique in private :-)

Thank you for the effort and supporting my event.

I'm not really into Lesbian stories but in saything this i hope you realize just how great story was when it can catch my attention. I really loved this story it was fantastic thank you for sharing it.

I like the story, it show what a mind this writer has. NLR.

This tale took much out of me, mostly heartache and tears ….. intense because this was unfortunately more then reality, happenings how we human beings abusing our „beloved“ ones ….. violence hate crime greed distrust money power and just name it ….. and on the receiving end children woman ….. reading this tale was definitely challenging and im happy with your ending …… thank you for sharing this tale, five stars are not enough ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝🌹

Maybe a bit more burn for the evil stepmother and her daughters.