All Comments on 'Andrew and Elsa: The Proposal'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

And Andrew is the descendant of which of the sisters? Well done! You've done Jane proud. 5 stars.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc9 months ago

Good read. I think the motion sickness was a bit overdone as the motion sickness medications are quite effective nowadays. Maybe claustrophobia would have been a more believable angle? Hey, as the father of 4 daughters, I'm a bit offended by Andrew not reaching out to her family before proposing. Just saying - LOL! 4.7*

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