All Comments on 'Andy Decides to Become a Model Pt. 02'

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arrowglassarrowglassover 4 years ago
Well done!

Keep 'em coming!

LudolfLudolfover 4 years ago
Great build up!

Love the way you build up the story, work well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Conversation

Instead of narrating the conversation between the two, it might be better for them to be actual convesation with quotation marks. It will make the conversation more take a more personal and intimate direction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

very erotic story and got me hard and wanking

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