Instead of narrating the conversation between the two, it might be better for them to be actual convesation with quotation marks. It will make the conversation more take a more personal and intimate direction.
I am 45 years old and divorced I have been enjoying reading the stories on this site and decided to try my hand at writing. I have been enjoying writing stories for this site. I am starting to appreciate more, the other authors on this site, as it does take time to write an...