by chris99999
Good story. He should fuck the mom and one of the daughters of both of them at the same time. Women eating snatch is way hot.
5 stars. No worry you did a great job of writing, so much so, please sent Rose's address. LOL.
5* but the narrative with thoughts going through his head was a little clunky at times. Likewise, why do the women have to instruct him on foreplay every time? Subtle hint that big dicked men suck at pleasuring anyone other than themselves?
I think that if unprotected sex happens that the reality of pregnancy occurs! I agree with another comment that either the sister in law or mother in law should have become pregnant!
I laugh at those who think women get pregnant every time they fuck. Most of us have 30 to 35 years of fertility, some have 40 years or more. Birth control pills became common in the late 60s. Diaphragms exist, as do IUD's. Birth control implants have become common. Finally most women are only fertile five or six days out of every month.
How about a chapter 3 with a threesome between him Tina and the mother in law and in the end the wife catches him and forces him to choose
Chapter 3: His brother visits, accidentally fucks Avril. Turns out she'd planned everything.
Strewth! Either the MC is sexually inexperienced or the women in his family are incredibly bossy.
The constant direction on his methods were becoming tiresome.