All Comments on 'Andy Saves the Burks Pt. 01'

Not bad! In fact it turned out pretty “hot” but you ended too soon! If this is a “true” incest story then you need to get the other people of Andy’s family involved especially with each other!

Umm, where's the incest/taboo?

It was ok, it doesn't fit the parameters of taboo though. Also, you kept mixing Andy and Ron up. Hopefully part two will be better.

who was Don and who was Ron.

Overall very good story, hope that you're working on the next one that will bring this into the taboo category.

Couple of relatively minor things (I don't know if Lit lets you edit stories, so this might be pointless, but hopefully it helps on your next story):

-The chapter marks seem unnecessary for such a short story.

-I think you were mixing up names, you kept referring to Ron as Andy.

Like I said, good story, but I'd love to see it get even better.

I like the premise - but you kept mixing up the names.

Wonderful interracial story here after the document signing. I find it hard to believe that a family would agree to be sexual slaves in exchange for financial freedom from business debt and college debt. But that aside, this was a wonderful fantasy story once you get by that part of it. 5 stars

A great story, although a bit short. Knowing more about everyone would be nice as well as a bit more detail.

I see that there is a part 2, so I'm moving on.

Thanks for sharing!

Assuming there is going to be a chapter I'll reserve judgment for now. However, the fact that Andy showed no reluctance whatsoever when she was required to fuck Ron was a little unbelievable . . . .