All Comments on 'Angel Dark'

Man your imagination is just something else.... really enjoyed the story and am looking forward to a lot more of these two.

God, I wish you would publish more of this...

I really enjoy your work- please publish more of this story!

You have deffinately grabbed my attention with this story, I'm hopin you let us have the rest of it, both before and after this section...Looks like it would make a wonderful novel...good luck and keep on writing.

definitely worth a longer story, i've passed over this one so many times because i didnt like the sound of it, not really being into pain, but am so glad i've read it now! heart, mind and body all got involved. great work, you're a good writer.

Oh my goodness. This was fab, I think it's the best one I've ever read. Really well written, and I like how it goes back and forth between their POVs. *faints* Amazing job!

Great story. Very imaginative and I'd love to know more of their story! Has it been published?

I would like to know that as well!

Can't wait for the full story!

If you must appropriate name of a writer for your chimerical creations, for the name of all that's holy take the name of some junk writer like Danielle Steele or Stephen King or some such supermarket "bound toilet paper" writer. Not the author of "Faustus".

I absolutely love this story and would love to read the rest! If it's part of a longer story, how can I read the rest?

I would really like to know if you have written any more of this. It is intriguing and I want to know what happens next!