All Comments on 'Angel of Death: The War'

I think you should number these b/c I am not sure what order to read them in. Like your 4th story which I saw in 'new stories' is at the top of the list. I'm goin by dates but I think you could make it easier by doing that. Or some write the order in their comments section on the Bio page. Just at the start of the stories say something like 'there are stories that go before this in the series. Look on my Bio page to get the order.

Anyhow, this story was short so there isn't much to say other than, I'd like you to have written who Tyrus is. Also, put in the job or defn. of what the angels/archangels and other groups mentioned do and where on the heirarchy they are. At least in one of the stories it would be good to do this. Other than that I am looking forward to more of the story.