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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

How could he hear the door open and hear her kissing her husband, but be the husband at the same time?

FredlyFredlyalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your comment, I appreciate any feedback. I would like to know good or bad feedback. Trying to learn about writing these stories.

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