by ReedRichards
A nice start. We'll see where the romance goes from here.
Lue
that guy sounds a little mental, unless theres some sort of history there
Well written and very plausible. Like someone said here somewhere - I also are looking for more!
She was saving herself for the love of her life back home, but gave herself to some guy in the dorm because she had a drink!
Get real dude!
...so well written. The reader falls inescapably into this guy's mind., I smell a wee bit of Holden Caulfield in this adolescent. 5*