All Comments on 'Angelina, the Stylist'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

"The sexist woman on earth ..." NO!!

There is a lot of difference between 'sexist' and 'sexiest'!

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc10 months ago

Pretty good story although I would have liked a more detailed buildup between Jax and Angelina. It seemed like they only crossed paths a handful of times before professing their love for one another. I caught the time between encounters, but surely there should more to it than just a few haircuts? 4.4*

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Please explain to me how his mother could hear the difference in the possessive and plural of the word daughter.

jrydher1jrydher110 months agoAuthor

Damn it. I hate when I don't catch spelling mistakes like that.

Cal59Cal5910 months ago

Dear Anon, she heard the S on the end of daughters, rather obvious isn’t it?

Nice story, well done, 5 stars

SatyrDickSatyrDick8 days ago

[05.05.24]

Que Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

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