by jonty54
She is 21. Is she still a virgin?
He is a DORK for not showing tenderness towards Sarah.
He has hurt her.
We need another chapter to build the story.
Uncertain on this story, also i dont agree with violence against women no matter what !! 3* for now, lets see what comes next ok ?
i like it. next chapter have a sex scene. and maybe let the sister talk more about how she feels. how does the mother react.