by Sealock
Kind of over the top here.. A whole chapter dedicated to sex descriptions.. Nah, you started out so good and now I feel you lost it, those one eyed *** sure got you good here :) Yoron.
Just wanted to say great job with the second chapter, would love to read where it goes from here. Keep up the good work...
WOW!!! I have no words right now.. intense, amazing, hot, superb!!