All Comments on 'Angie the Asian Slut'

He needs a swift kick to the balls and dumped. She needs a real Dom.

Tess (uk)

I would suggest you pay a little more attention to detail, there are some weird problems with your story, like saying she has no underwear, then 4 sentences later talk about her thong is wet? Overall it would be great to read your stories in the future, hoping you just go through a little bit more of an editing exercise.