by R410a
Sex only does not make a story good. You need a good plot and consistant characters, a good character is not just a combination of sexual organs. That’s what makes your stories interesting. And your are good stories.
If you don’t know what to do with some comments you should read a tale written by Jean Delafontaine during 17th century: Le meunier, son fils et l’âne (The miller, his son and the donkey). If you can read French, the text is in verses (alexandrians), but you can find good translations.
Thank you for your work and your good stories. I look forward to read you again
I'm not sure why the haters are giving you crap b/c I thought it was a lovely story. To me, your story isn't unrealistic. Then again, I'm a little biased b/c I'm black and the hubs is white and we've been together for 16 years. So haters can hate us both. 🤗
I really love your stories I had a black girlfriend briefly while going university but we parted after graduation and lost touch with each other sadly.
Loved the story, sorry to see it end but glad for the verry happy ending. It seemed that there was a lot of sex in this short chapter, but it was much more than just wham bam and on to the next. It was two people learning the ins and outs (no pun intended) of true love. More of exploration than lust,. It's been one hell of a long time ago, but I can remember my wedding night and first days as a married couple. This story pretty much hits the nail on the head. No reason this doesn't get five stars, thanks.
A wonderful conclusion to this sweet, romantic tale, beautifully written by master storyteller R410a. It is refreshing to find a good romance story on the site.
What a great story. keep up the great work. I can't imagen how some of your readers make bad remarks This one is at the least 10 stars.
I read one story and think that it's the best one I've read, then along comes this one, and my best story list changes. Keep up bringing these new ones out. Stars 15.
Who cares about the color of the skin in a romance story; and it was a wonderful romance story. Thank you!!! Keep on keeping on!!
Great story. Enjoyed it very much. Have been married to my ebony goddess for 34 years now, so these types of stories are a favorite to read.
I keep saying this but, when a story is great there's not anything more you can say. Thank you. Another 15 stars.