All Comments on 'Angry Insight'

by eclecticdreamer

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saw_man1saw_man1over 18 years ago
Good but,

It was a good story that was almost too short. I especially liked the line, "butterflies performed stunning feats of acrobatics in her stomach."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
More, more!

Verry excellent story. I can't wait to read the rest of your submissions... Don't stop.

yungjoc18yungjoc18over 16 years ago
WOW

that was amzing to man u should keep writing on these stroys fa real cause ur amazing

Goose7Goose7over 15 years ago
im surprised!!!!

Wow, im really surprised at how much i loved your story. why? Simply, i hate short stories but yours was really something really really great. Thankyou for surprising me, keep writing!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Change is good ;)

Surprised that there aren't any comments on this one yet! Great quickie- Enjoyed it immensely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

wow..continuation ???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

wowow... yes please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

wow..why are lesbian stories so hot and sexy

haeonamarshaeonamarsalmost 13 years ago
CHAPTER 2 PLEASE!!!!

what happens next!?!?

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 12 years ago
Revenge.

This was a lovely hot story. How she planned to get even is a bit vague, but then anger can mush up even the clearest thinker (not to mention the whiskey). Whether looking for it or not, my guess is she has new insight.

I wonder what they will talk about when they finally get around to it. Hmm, now THAT will be a challenge for your well honed writing skills.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Oh yes; sweet revenge (or not)

8~P

So "L" the spider had actually set a trap to steal Candice, gotta love it 8~)

DKP ... 50+ yo straight guy

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
thanks

8~P

So "L" the spider had actually set a trap to steal Candice, gotta love it 8~)

DKP ... 50+ yo straight guy

blackash01blackash01over 9 years ago
damn

too short. I would of loved more of this story

doublesaintdoublesaintover 8 years ago
twas a great story...

You could have gone on and on, but twas a great story...you need to write more for yourself and your fans.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Pussy dripping

Please continue this story...you don't know how wet you made me and how hard I came ❤️❤️

Danno_61455Danno_61455almost 8 years ago
OH SO NICE

I hope this seduction into a Bi life continues with out Jake being involved!!

MarshallaMarshallaover 6 years ago
Sometimes revenge is a dish ...

... best served HOT!

TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago

Wow! I love it! Here's hoping that you'll venture back to writing again and add to this great start! Thank you!

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