Animal Lover Ch. 08

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Lyssa screws up her face as two wolves rush by and she is nearly knocked down.

Stephanie grabs her to steady her as the chase ends. A very familiar grey wolf pins a smaller, cream colored one.

Emmett stands over Joanna, a large paw on her chest.

"God, Emmett, what the hell is wrong with you? Attacking a little girl?"

She stalks off to the dining hall, leaving three thoroughly confused wolves behind.

Emmett snarls and heads for the front door.

[Where are you going?]

[Hunting.]

[I don't get it. You've fought for so much. Why aren't you fighting for her?]

[Tired of it.]

[Riiight.]

[Leave me be, Jo, you're not helping.]

She sighs and walks to her place at the dinner table, utterly unconcerned about her nudity.

Lyssa sits beside her and begins to look longer at Thomas, who licks his lips at the sight of her watching him.

Thomas looks across the room at Emmett's bitch. Dark hair, dark brown eyes, breasts, high and firm, that would about fill his palms. Mmm, nice. A nice ass with hips just made to grab ahold of. His dick stiffened just thinking about it. Hot. Wet. Tight.

Since she wasn't marked he was betting Emmett hadn't been there yet. He was such a traditionalist about some things.

He had been pissed off enough when he'd gone over to talk to her, what would Emmett do if he got there first?

Emmett wasn't around. It was a great opportunity.

Emmett runs down a small deer. Growling, snarling, he tears out its throat, then begins to feed. Warm, thick blood filled his mouth and covered his muzzle.

Gobbets of flesh slid down his throat.

Sated, he went for a run. A long one.

And, as he ran, he began to think.

Of how much he wanted a mate, and pups. Of how much he wanted her.

A number of females, from a couple of packs, had paraded their tails before him. He'd spent time with a few, to their mutual satisfaction, but none had interested him enough that he would mate with them.

One of the reasons he hadn't fully taken Lyssa was that that he thought that, if he started, he wouldn't be able to stop himself from marking her. Then she'd have no choice at all.

She was mad, and rightfully so, as he'd endangered her life by his plans to bring her into the pack, to make her his own. But, it wasn't as if there was a roadmap for this sort of thing. The last human brought into the pack was over 20 years ago.

Should he have Jeremy talk to her? Or Anna?

Damn. He should just go back to the house and cover her in his scent.

Randall had apologized to him... That meant they pretty much accepted her... That they had no real opposition to bringing her into the pack... That, that, he might actually have a chance with her.

She'd been here a bit more than a day now. Ariel had to have someone teaching her about the pack, structure, behaviors.

How could he approach her now?

Could they start over? Go back?

As dinner ends Lyssa lingers and Thomas walks over to the table. "So, come here often?"

Lyssa looks at him, and bursts out laughing. Through the chortling, she gets out, "Could you come out with a cornier line?"

Stephanie huffs as they start walking back to Lyssa's room. "Do we need a chaperone?"

The regularly fucking couple is wrapped around each other, locked together.

"The Madam Alpha assigned me to watch over her. I'm not going anywhere."

He takes Lyssa by the elbow as they walk up the stairs. "So, what do you think of our den?"

They talk of light subjects on the way to her room, walking slowly.

At the door he turns her slowly toward him and puts a hand on her cheek. She looks up into hazel eyes and his face comes closer, and she accepts his kiss.

He then takes her face, and presses the kiss deeper, his tongue in her mouth. His left hand slides down, brushes over her breast, over her waist. He grabs her ass and yanks her closer to him.

She can feel the thickness of his dick against her belly. He groans and she moans lightly. Fur begins to sprout on his arms.

Joanna is coming down for a visit, having dressed, and sees what is going on.

[Stephanie!] [Thomas, let her go.]

[Not doing anything wrong, little one.]

"Enough, Thomas. Move on, now." Stephanie grabs his arm.

Joanna grabs Lyssa, to pull her away. "Hey!"

Stephanie pulls Thomas away and Joanna pulls Lyssa to her room. "What are you doing?"

"What are you doing? You're here for Emmett. Why are you doing this to him?"

"Emmett? Emmett got me into this. If you haven't noticed, he hasn't come anywhere near me. Why should he care?"

"I thought you didn't want to be here, now I find you making out with the local Casanova?"

"I'm stuck here, aren't I? Why can't I have a good time?"

"I don't believe you. You have no idea what he's given up for you, do you?"

"Oh, please. I'm the one who's lost her job, probably her house. What did he lose?"

Joanna looks at her. "You really don't know, do you?"

"What?"

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Least favorite. This makes Lyssa seem like a slut.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I'm hooooooked :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
need......next.....chapter

really love this story. ill be checking back for the next chapter

shyintxshyintxover 13 years ago
HURRY HURRY

I need my next fix. I just love your story.

rosamundirosamundiover 13 years ago
I disagree about dashes...

I understand, as an editor, the wishes of strict grammarians, but your constantly shifting points of view are the beauty of this work, in my opinion. It yields an impression of what it would be like to live in a pack, what it IS like to live in a fairly boisterous family.

It hearkens back to Austen's perfecting of the novel form in English by transitioning from epistolary writing to theater on paper, with the dialogues both internal and external telling the story.

Can't wait to read the next chapter of Animal Lover, and I greatly enjoyed your short story. I don't favorite just anyone. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More please

More please more this story rocks

AyamiAyamiover 13 years ago

not fair u cant just leave it there :( cant wait to read the next one

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
love it!

absolutley love your story... every chapter has me begging and waiting for more.. would be a great published story i hope this story goes on for a long time

isis91isis91over 13 years ago

love this story. I agree there needs to be more division between chapters. Some people don't like what Lyssa's doing or hows shes acting - thats reasonable. But she's angry, as anyone would be when most of their life choices get taken from them and she wants to hurt the people she blames.

indianfireindianfireover 13 years ago
addictive

I really like the story, and I wish the chapters were longer because it is really good. The previous commenter was right though, you may want to use dashes or asterisks in between paragraphs that go from one character's perspective to another.

Keep up the good work.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 13 years ago
This chapter

jumped all over the place. It was very difficult to read. The use of present tense was also annoying and the chapter could use a lot of editing. Also, Lyssa was being an absolute idiot. Not a trace of rational woman to be found. Didn't like this chapter much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good story but

STOP USING PRESENT TENSE

caramelcreamcaramelcreamover 13 years ago
Liking where this is going...

This is pretty different from the usual werewolf stories, and I appreciate that. I do have a few technical requests...

Please add space breaks (****************) between scenes. I was confused about what was happening, at times, because the story jumped from scene to scene without notice.

Identify the speaker as he/she speaks. Dialogue seemed to appear with no one to claim it. This wouldn't be so bad if the conversations were always limited to two people, but a lot of the den scenes included three or more.

< i > Italicize < /i > thoughts and telepathic communication. The brackets [ ] were quite distracting, and seemed to break the flow of the story...

Be careful with the verb-tense. The majority of the first page is written in the present tense, i.e. Ariel turns, Stephanie walks, Lyssa stops, Joanna looks, etc. That is already strange, though it can be done. Then, it changed to past tense when Emmett went to Lyssa's house, and it continued to switch back and forth between tenses fairly regularly until the end. This is not something a lot of people notice or care about, but it is something a writer should care about. Your story is very good so far--I'm certainly enjoying it--and I want it to continue. I believe in constructive criticism, and simply want you to get better at what you're doing. I would recommend an editor to help you work on these things and keep the stories flowing smoothly. Keep up the good work!

willieonewillieoneover 13 years ago
catman71

If that is her reason for making out with Thomas then it is a cruel one! Then to compare the loss of a job and a house to having the love of her life is pretty shallow. All Emmett has ever done is protect her and love her and this is what he gets in return! A wolf mates for life right! He has been waiting a long time to finally find his mate his wolf would not want anyone else so wouldn't his wolf loose the will to live!

I can't believe this chapter has make me so pissed and depressed please post the next chapter NOW.

catman71catman71over 13 years ago
hmm

i think em is just trying to give her space being that the last two times she snapped at him in such a way. the thing with the alphas could be just oversight, as humans being in the den is not a usual thing, and i think she , consciously , is attempting to goad em in to an action that reinforces her perception but on the sub conscious level wants him to stake the claim

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