All Comments on 'Ann: A Love Story Ch. 08'

What an end to an incredible weekend! I'm happy to see that Neil has been able to heal and can maybe now find that happiness in life that he really deserves. What I really liked about this story so far is your writing. You had these characters go off (in a sense) to fulfill both of their fantasies as well as heal themselves inside from past hurts but what gets me most how you seemed to intertwine all of that together and STILL manage to make the reader feel all kinds of emotions stemming from romance to lust...and WITHOUT any of it coming off as cheap, disgusting or even disrespectful.

Your writing grabs the reader and no matter what is going on, whether them acting out a fantasy threesome or just the 2 of them playing softball....you make the reader feel like they have a front row seat and their watching a movie.

I'll be on the lookout for the next part! I can't wait to see what happens when Neil goes back to his everyday life now. Thanks!

I was disappointed with all the protestations about why they could not make more of their relationship. They were more compatible than many couples who succeed are.

CONGRATULATIONS. You certainly know your way around a sentence. The first 8 chapters are all captivating. I can hardly wait to continue reading the rest. Thanks for sharing.

Great first chapter

A wonderful book You have started, one Chapter Down...

244 Jake

A real tear-jerker of a chapter, with a marvelous and passionate romantic aura from start to finish. Wonderful story telling with compelling characters, enhanced by excellent writing. Five stars.

Yes, it's fantasy, and yes, I loved it, as a fantasy. But still, I just have to say it: You never, never, never, ever leave someone tied up. No, you don't!