All Comments on 'Anna and the Vampire Ch. 02'

wish ithad been longer but glad you have finaly continued the story...trs

You are off to a great start. Would love for it to be longer. Frequently update please.

Sorry it took so long but I was busy turning the Prisoner in his harem story I posted her into a full novel that is at least twice as long and a full fledged love story with a lot of background and has a long epilogue in what you can read what happened to the them in the years after what was published here. You can find it on Amazon as "Rosebud and the Sheikh".

Would love this to be longer and updated frequently, but it is understandable if you are too busy. Good story 5/5***

Ch2 is better than ch1

Ch1 a few continuity issues

1 Was she shot once or many times?

2 How did she instantly know her killer when they had never met ?

Ch 2 much tighter

3 is he vampire AND a Were? Ok you can solve that in ch4😀

Longer chapters plz

As the story is set in modern times one can assume that at the moment of a wedding Anna would have seen pictures of the groom on Facebook at least.

The groom fires once but not a single shot but a burst.

In old vampire stories Dracula can change into bats and other animals. But not a werewolf just normal animals.

Anna can hear animals talk after the incident. There is a reason for that.

I hope this explanation helps. Chapter three will take at least a week or so because I have a holidaytrip planned. Sorry :)

In the meantime please come up with ideas of your own for the story. What do you think will happen next?

In many good stories things are not crystal clear from the beginning. That is why you keep reading. It is called intrigue. Sometimes you have to reread a story. And in cases like this one you have to wait for new chapters. Or maybe this is just not your kind of story.

I really like how you construct this story :D I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work! Have a nice day :) ^.^b

I dislike it when people lie to writers. This story needs work, the plot is already weak. I've witnessed wounds like that, trust me if the person was still alive/lucid the last thing on their mind would sex. It also feels like a teen has written this, it reads immature.

i do not care what anyone else says i like the story so far. i truly hope to see and read a lot more of it soon...trs

I am loving your stories. Please do continue with the story. I am waiting anxiously and so intrigued as where the story will continue.