by bwelch
Howdy Hi,
Enjoying the slow build up. You may want to get a proof reader.
Horror
Horror films are made to frighten or shock the viewer through the means of the macabre, fantastic or supernatural, and thus frequently overlapping with science fiction. Perhaps more than any other genre, what is considered to be a horror film has varied from decade to decade. Suggested menace that was once clearly a provenance of horror now would be categorized as a mystery or a crime thriller (The Silence of the Lambs), with the term "horror" applied to films which display more explicit gore (Wes Craven's New Nightmare). These films frequently overlap with thriller, science fiction and fantasy.
this Story carries a lot of promise - eagerly waiting to see how the Story continues
really enjoyed the first 2 chapters of this. Both short but set the scene very well. Hopefully chapter 3 will see some intimate action!
Your a really good writer and its better than the first chapter. You truly have caught my attention please do keep it up and update soon. Your a very interesting writer. Good luck
please continue with your lovely story. i can't wait for max, the hero, to win her damsel. :)