All Comments on 'Annabelle Ch. 08'

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88girfriend over 1 year ago

I am very torn. I love the quantity of your writing but feel you need to slow down. There are quite a few places where the sentence is grammatically correct but does not flow as well as it could.

You wrote: The woman from the couple from the car, was kneeling next to me.

I would have probably said, A woman from one of the others couples knelt next to me.

Love your local slang. I'm in the USA and have not heard the term dogging site for a long time. Please keep writing.

Gbchris over 1 year ago

This is a great series and VERY REFRESHING that the terminology was all British and not yank.

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