All Comments on 'Anna's Taboo Christmas Gift'

Well, lovely story as well as hot sensual fucking. Thank you.

It hit all the right buttons, well done. Well worth the 5 stars I gave you..

Outstanding !!!!!

Well done!

Awesome. Well done.

Superb writing! Makes it even better since I'm from central IL and know all the places you describe.

Only a writer knows how hard it is to get a story to this level of perfection.

Great love story. I give it 5 stars and 4 Kleenexes.

Enjoyable read. Lots of room for a sequel.

I've read this story before. Have you posted before?

absolutely wonderful story. Is there more please? Their lives from here on as they make their way in the world and make babies of their own.

Very, very nice!

Wow! Perfect. Plot, story, flow, familiarity (my son lives in Chicago; wish he’d get out), truely one of the best stories on this site and of this genre.

Wow!!! 173 out of 10!

Very, very well done. Thoroughly gripping throughout, very nice build-up to the inevitable climax (pun intended), and very loving and real.

Great storytelling/writing, it brought up lots of fond Chicago north side memories. In defense, NU was not all trust-fund FOBs. I made it even through NU and GSM from the wilds of the PNW!

That was a very sweet story. Thank you.

Great story!

This story was so well done. Thank you so much for sharing. It was a special holiday gift.

Hello All:

Thank you so much for the kind comments. In answer to a question from a couple of days ago, no, I have not posted this story before. However, I did publish it on Smashwords last year under my alter-ego pen name, Alana Church. If anyone is interested, you can find it here:

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1117887

Thanks again and happy reading!

Glaze72

It was a wonderful story and I gave you a 5/5 for my vote. But one thing really troubles me. Why are they so worked up over Christmas if neither one of them is attending church anymore? Christ is the reason for the season. We give each other gifts as a tradition started by the Three Scholars, known better as the Wisemen. They gave the baby Jesus gifts to honor him. Having Anna make a wisecrack about the Lutheran Church was not a good thing.

You mentioned that Jimmy and Anna had a "Charlie Brown Christmas Tree" as a decoration. But I'm thinking that maybe you entirely missed the true message that Charles Schultz was sending out to everyone who watched this 30 minute television special. Charlie Brown asks "Can anyone tell me what Christmas is all about?" Linus answered that question by reciting Luke's Gospel, then he said, "That's what Christmas is all about, Charlie Brown." Linus was absolutely correct.

This is a good story , yet the sister came across as being a bit bitchy at times towards him, that’s the feeling I got here. Yet she never gave off a hint as to be falling for him prior to the first kiss

awful story. try again

Satisfying read.

Sister emphasized that she’s been with a bunch of dudes and she’s only 18. To the streets!

A well written story. Enjoyed reading it.

great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you

GREAT WRITING!!! THIS IS MY FIRST READING OF THE STORIES THAT YOU HAVE POSTED HERE, I EXPECT MORE OF THIS KINDS OF STORIES, AND ABOVE ALL KEEP WRITING!!!

Excellently written story. After reading a few comments, I thought the sister had a well written personality and it was a nice touch that she wasn't a virgin Saint. Also, Christmas is to be enjoyed by everyone, regardless of geography or religion. I should learn from the depth of detail in this while writing my own stories.

A great Christmas story. Well written with a good long build-up. Nice detail and without a long tale after the climactic event. I really enjoyed it.

Excellent. 5* Should be cross posted in the Romance section as well. Beautifly written

Fantastic story! Your dialogue, descriptions, character development, plot, build up of sexual tension, and premise are all spectacular. You progressed the story nicely and the payoff was fantastic. This story highlights your talents as a writer. Keep up the great work and continue to share your talents!

Great story! Thanks for writing it.

What a wonderful and sensual story. 5 🌟.

This isn't porn.its a love story....with all the trimmings!

What a beautiful, wonderful story , full of love

Tears of joy reading your story. And just the right ending.

So hot, and so sweet ...

Well-written story that I enjoyed at first, but as more background was revealed it became clear that Sis isn’t a good long-term prospect for anything more than sex… as mentioned by someone below, she’s for the streets. I wanted to root for her, and it’s not like she needed to be a virgin, but she’s had sex with someone, not the same someone, at least once every week since she turned 16… and she has a butt plug collection at 18! She tells her brother she’s always loved and wanted him, but while she waited to tell him she was the high school bicycle… and she’s unlikely to be any less promiscuous going forward. All of which is to say, could have been 5* but one of the MCs is too flawed to care about as anything other than a readily available (to anyone) receptacle…

This is more than wonderful. So beautifully written. Tears of sadness to tears of overwhelming joy. A heartfelt Thank You!

Anna is a spoiled selfish bitch, and a slut who is just using her brother for a good fuck

EXCELLENT. I love the romance. Sex is great but love makes it better

I was amazed by some of the negative comments about Anna. So she enjoyed sex, so she played with toys. So what? Two of the finest, most beautiful inside people and ladies I have known started out as street whores. By the way each married a friend and each were the finest wife and mother that could be expected. Another was a woman who was about as wild and sexual as could be imagined from early teenage until about 25, then became a great wife and caring mother. So cut the sexist bullshit, Anna might simply have enjoyed sex until she got what she needed. Ninety percent of the men I know would have loved to have done the same. Beautiful story, and Anna was indeed a special gift... Thanks

Ahh, yes, the Literotica anonymous, who require that all women be virgins otherwise they are whores. Only to experience sexual education at the hands of men who have somehow magically gained their knowledge since no one would take up with a whore...

Amazing story -- full of passion and very well written. Kudos!

Ignore those who trash what they can't pen themselves. They mock anonymously, criticizing with every opportunity, then scurry to read and negatively comment on the next. It's ironic how anyone would go to a site like Literotica, read a long story with the correct tags, to simply to bash it at the end. Ironic...and pathetic.

Easily one of the best, albeit a little long, stories I've read on here. Great job!

You are an excellent writer.

Well, Christmas is a time where family is meant to come together...

Outstanding

Wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it. 5 stars.

The plot started off fine but the entitled, promiscuous, and uncaring sister was enough to derail the story.

To some of the comments below it isn't the amount of sex a person has that makes them a whore (or man-whore) it is the number of people they have it with.

Well written and was.a.relationship that anyone would dream of even if it was not sexual. The trust and understanding was apparent throughout. Back to read another of your stories.

My second read of this wonderful story of sibling love. I hope there is more as they make a life together including babies.

Getting laid every week before since sixteen and taking a guy home from a bar? That's slutty as shit.

Fantastic job of writing and getting me, the reader, involved in their lives.

Good story, but I'm still having difficulty believing that she suddenly fell in love with her brother. Seemed like the love buildup was lacking. The sex buildup certainly was not lacking, as if she primarily related to men that way, but hadn't with her brother until they stayed together. Then she turned it on him. Didn't seem like love at first, just more of her sexual relating. Then she writes him the Xmas note, and the love is suddenly all there. Was hard to believe for me, I'm still trying to figure it. Seemed like she'd never been in love before, so maybe it was some kind of big revelation to her like that. But it still seemed like "I want sex, sex, sex, and now suddenly I love you forever, be my mate for life". I dunno, I wasn't convinced. Better take some time, bro, and see how she develops, as it's early days and she seems quite changeable, even though she is very hot. Is she capable of a long term love relationship? I guess you'll find out.

Excellent story, well told. Only thing missing was an epilog... 5 years later, Christmas Eve, Anna tells Jimmy to check his stocking... within its a letter, reminiscent of the one he received from Santa when he was 5 years old... telling him he was going to have a daughter to protect.

I stopped reading after her losing her virginity "quickly and easily" and immediately decending into sluthood. Yuck. It's almost as bad as being a man-slut.

I just want some of those cookies.

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OG46

Wonderful, you have knack to nock it way over fourth base.