All Comments on 'Anna's Unexpected Guest'

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RavenOnCaRavenOnCaover 13 years ago
50-50

50-50 split on this one,.....

Concept was interesting, but what kind of turned me off was the grandfather - grand daughter constantly instead of actual names... I dont know any grandparents that don't call their kids by their first names...

Would of liked to have seen more intimacy as well...

Again, interesting concept, but just spoiled it for me with the formalities...

daddygoesdeepdaddygoesdeepover 13 years ago
Nice start pretty girl

Another chapter cumming I hope.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Small suggestion

Good but ALWAYS run it through a spell-check :) The story will ALWAYS run a lot more smoothly when there are no errors (i.e. commonly misspelled words).

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
???

Lmao that didn't make any sense! He psychically knew she was pregnant and then broke in to the house for some pussy? I think you just wanted to get off to Grandpa's and Grandaughter incest and then combined it with another random fetish of yours xD

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