by xox_princess_xox
50-50 split on this one,.....
Concept was interesting, but what kind of turned me off was the grandfather - grand daughter constantly instead of actual names... I dont know any grandparents that don't call their kids by their first names...
Would of liked to have seen more intimacy as well...
Again, interesting concept, but just spoiled it for me with the formalities...
Good but ALWAYS run it through a spell-check :) The story will ALWAYS run a lot more smoothly when there are no errors (i.e. commonly misspelled words).
Lmao that didn't make any sense! He psychically knew she was pregnant and then broke in to the house for some pussy? I think you just wanted to get off to Grandpa's and Grandaughter incest and then combined it with another random fetish of yours xD