All Comments on 'Anne Obeys Reluctantly'

by TheDarkCloud

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Should be in IR not nonconsent or BDSM

Actually the husband isnt anything to think about, twenty years of no sex? The wife is a criminal and a pure trashy sexless female. The sexual predator is nothing more than a hood trying to be a man. What is there to like in this story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
You Sir,

are a dirty nasty minded S.O.B. I really like the way you think. Keep it up, I'll be looking forward to the next chapters. Remember a week is 7 long days.

Mike S.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great Story

Love these type of stories; woman forced to comply!! Looking forward to her remaining days. Give her a good workout.

TheDarkCloudTheDarkCloudover 16 years agoAuthor
Some Feedback

Here's some feedback I've received about this stroy.

As one of my favourite Authors you always deliver quality material. I think for Anne an anal train of 6 black men follwed by her husband. Then make him his weak ass lick all the cum from her ass and thighs

Another GREAT one! You know I'd love to read ANOTHER episode where she is made to strip at a private party...perhaps with co-workers or neighbors or others who know her...and then service all the guests

good beginning. have her forced into prostitution, lesbian, sex with homeless men and women and selling her body in slums

I liked this story right off. Liked it even more when I realized Anne's tormentor was black. This was a very well written story and while I'me no big on gang-bangs or MMF threesomes, I will give further chapters a read. Good job

Great story

I am looking forward to the rest of the story

Domination stories like this are great! Don't know exactly where your story will go but, if you get a chance, you could include some serious tit & nipple abuse.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
From class to trash

Love the way she has to submit to anything the preditor wants from her. Even tho she hates it her body gives her away. I agree that the week is 7 days long and the preditor has hot plans for her degradation. When he is done with her she will be well used (and a lot of readers will be satisfied :-))

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Im So Hot

Omg loving dis story more please. Gang raping her is a must 4 dis story and involving people who no her 2 mayb her secritary fisting her. Love Kinkx

Guerilla30892001Guerilla30892001over 13 years ago
Loving the 'mature' woman bit

Great stuff, I love these types of stories about the 'mature' woman

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
:P

more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

add more chapters xD

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Watch Those Pronouns!

Are they her trousers or his? This is a common typo that spellcheck won't catch. Proofreading will prevent such minor errors.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
C'mon Man

I need to hear more get crackin

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
more please

loved the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
finish it

Your a great writer but you don't really finish any of your stories .....

JohnnyGaltJohnnyGaltover 10 years ago

"Who knows indeed? Well I do"

And yet you never shared with *US*

As someone else said, you never finish your stories!!!

Anonymous
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