All Comments on 'Anne Working Overtime Ch. 01'

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manysinnz about 18 years ago

Fantastic!

Great development and buildup. Will it be continued!!!??? I'm dying to read more.

mummys dirty angel about 18 years ago

enthralling

This is a great start and i'm now going to read the next chapter! I love the way you describe Annes feelings of want and need!

off to read chapter 2!

xxx

Anonymousover 17 years ago

WOW!!

I WOULD LIKE MUCH MORE.

J-Stroke over 16 years ago

Tossed about on a sea of Emotions

Fabulous beginning to what has all of the feel of a remarkable story, nicely done. It brings to mind a very long, slow burning fuse. The reader is left to wonder just when it will reach it's end and anticipate the explosion that is certain to follow.

Anonymousover 11 years ago

interesting start.

An interesting storyline, a little bit of a stuttering start but could be fun. I'm waiting tosee how you'll handle a first time love affair for young Anne.

Anonymousabout 6 years ago

Mmmm

Anne is meeting women who are superior to her mother in so many ways!

Pixiehoff over 4 years ago

Love this

What a great build up. Wonderfully described characters, and a definite page turner - If there were pages x

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