All Comments on 'Anne's Dilema'

I liked this! More please!!

Lukas

Oh you are good!!! Now I really like that approach to her doing her Daddy!! That was very inventive, and very erotic. Good story! I think I could be had like that too!

Thanks for trying, however I never sensed a modicum of believability in the story. If your reader cannot accept the premise of the plot, you will never capture his/her attention. But, thanx for your effort

Good techique - exquisite writing but the story is unconvincing. It is like building a castle on the sand. What a waste! If you want to try again, try a new one pls, don't waste your effort on this story anymore.

A woman scorned is capable of self destruction to prove a point. Imagine a daughter scorned, left unfullfiled, replaced by an adolecent competitor. She is capable of anything, Yes I find the actions believable and very probable.

John C.

tell_redshoe

Segue is definitely not your long suit . . . .