All Comments on 'Annie, Mall Bait.'

Oh my Gawd!!! That was fuckin Hot! I hope there is more to this story!!! I want to see Annie getting fucked in the kitchen when Hubble gets home from work!! More Pleeeeeease!!!

So hot!! Loved this! Is there another chapter coming? Maybe his friends get involved this time. Keep writing.

but you told it well, giving us a feeling for both her denial and then submission. I liked her comparing her slut side to her Southern upbringing, even as she was being drawn in to the taboo mating ritual. 5 stars.

~B

A great story. A good item to fill in the empty spaces between the chapters of the Branson Family. I love your writing and your descriptions are very well done, even as we all know it is a fantasy as you mention in your foreword....richar

good story I loved the second part her breasts would be big but firm and full of milk and there would also be a gangbang

do not worry about the bad comments the story is good in the second part add a gangbang of her and she should have big breasts for the baby good writer

do not pay attention to the bad comments those who make bad comments must be resentful maybe they are racist and his mother or someone in his family got involved with a black man that's why the anger the good thing about this site is the lust that it produces us Some people read these stories, the story is one of the best I've read, I love it, you are a very good writer, so ignore the bad comments, thank you for your story

I thought the story was amazing. Nothing like a prim and proper southern belle and maybe even a debutante being given what she really wants! Sweatermeat1, I mean Melissa, you have an eye for putting a story together and leading the reader along for an erotic ride!!

Joe

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I could put that her breasts reached a size g but her waist was just as thin and don't forget a bbc gangbang

Awesome story. Her being taken while alone in her own home is what makes the story so erotic. Please use this story as a template and write more just like it. Perhaps in the next one the wife and mother can be taken by a well hung black man in her own living room. 5 Stars!

by when the next part please reply we are anxious

By the time part 2 we go, it's the best story I've ever read

Please part 2

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part 2

This is the best story I have read and you will not be able to get the second part, please do the second part, finish it, I am reading it, thank you very much

part 2

Please 1 year part 2

Part 2 is nearly finished.Please keep an eye out, Melissa

Thanks a lot

thank you for making a second part of this wonderful story, what a great writer you are

what day is the second part

we can't wait for this story publish what you wear but publish it now

Need part 2

That was so FN HOT! Panties were damp as I began reading.

Panties were off and orgasm attained as I finished the naughty married white wife's journey into bliss.

Part 2 please

you said that part 2 was almost finished but it's been 6 months and you still haven't posted anything don't make us suffer anymore post what you have

Very hot story

This was a masterpiece of a story. Hopefully, the black teen hunk will find other white mothers to use and abuse.

You are a great writer!!!

This story was really hot. However, I wonder whether Literotica rules would allow the same story with a Whte teen stud and an attractive mature dark chocolate black woman. Just wondering.

Thank you for you wonderful commits. Annie Part 2 will be out shortly and I a considering a separate story line in the future pertaining to Deshawn's journey. As to the white teen and a black woman, I do not no the rules surrounding that type of storyline. I would hope it would be permitted as I am against censorship in any form.

I have read all your stories. I absolutely love your writing and can not wait till you release a new one. Thanks for all the good reads!

When will you post the second part?

Yessss to be bred by a thick long black cock, to have him make me beg for his baby! It’s all I want in this world❤️❤️

Thank you Wendy! Annie part 2 is almost finished and I have a few other stories in the works that should bring you pleasure. Melissa

Annie needs to have her baby daddy enjoy her swollen belly and talk about it while they fuck and fuck.