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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

She'll continue to fuck other men because that's what sluts do. She'll eventually figure out she's married to a sissy wimp who is willing to give her away. He sat outside the door to make sure she was safe? What was he going to do if she wasn't? He'd never have been able to get into the room to help her. This will dawn on her and she will have sex with him less and less because she doesn't love him she only loves what he gives her. Her disrespect with grow until it demands she dump him. His only consolation after getting cleaned out in the divorce is one morning, she'll wake up with STD's and probably never recover. Stupid couple

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A cuck is born!

LenardSpencerLenardSpencerabout 1 year ago

If they really were a loving couple that wanted to "share" experiences, then the husband should have been in the room with his wife. Just letting her have the experience by herself just cheapens their relationship and now she is thinking all about dating apps, singles bars and probably swinging groups. Stupid husband has just lost his wife and he doesn't yet realise it because of his desire to be a cuck. The idiot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

just another cuck story get a life

DessertmanDessertmanabout 1 year ago

An average variation on a very common theme. The ending indicates that they may be heading towards a disaster.

BlakeHardlyBlakeHardlyabout 1 year ago

Quite the hotwife... she'll be fun to follow on her journey to pleasure land

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The story was okay. I know everyone fantasizes about picking up a stranger and being excited over illicit sex. The unfortunate truth is that the Earth is littered with dead women, spring break teenies, CD 's, trans girls and gay/bi guys that just happen to cross paths with the wrong person at the wrong time. According to namUS, more than 600,000 people go missing in the U.S. each year; and an average of 4,400 unidentified persons remains are recovered each year. The story takes place in Paris. Take into consideration having to deal with a negative situation in a foreign country. In this story, the husband definitely should have been present and not taken any chances with his wife's well-being. I understand the fantasy. I don't understand the lack of precautions and caution.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I hope this is your last attempt at writing. There are way too many cuck writers already and all of you are deranged assholes writing stories about emotionally crippled men and the "bulls" who never have any morals. Sickening!

Ridiculous69Ridiculous69about 1 year ago

Just another author using the obsession with being a cuck or slut to push the agenda. Why are these authors focused on making husbands sad and pathetic little perverts? They ensure the wives are instant sluts and have the gall to sell that everyone is now happier. Cucks are abnormal and emotionally or mentally damaged. Just stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The same story with the same characters, delivering the same tired lines in the same plot, with the same outcome. Wait, isn't that the definition of a fetish?

Buster2UBuster2Uabout 1 year ago

What a Naughty baby, a little strange and now she is dreaming of a new life of constant strange! 5 stars for great writing, and a great Story. Thanj for the Great effort and the happy ending. Thanks Buster

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 1 year ago

Thought the scene was hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

She already going behind his back. Another cheater in the making.

70slowhands70slowhandsabout 1 year ago

Oh my God. This has to be one of the most erotic stories I have read in years. 5 stars. wish I could give it a higher rating.

snarbozsnarbozabout 1 year ago

And soon Mark will be considering divorce lawyers

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

he helped open the door for her to become a slut. he may be sorry down the road but its to late now idiot.

Lumpy2Lumpy2about 1 year ago

Loved it! Life is short and I would want this for my wife. As many times as she wants. anything to make her happy 😊

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well-written, just not my "thing".

Rocky62Rocky62about 1 year ago

Well written but such a husband will soon be the ex husband. So few can live this way

bluengraybluengrayabout 1 year ago

Really really enjoyed this! I’ve been the husband in this story, and it truly is just about the wife being happy! But as Rocky62 said, few marriages can survive encounters like this one. It takes two; two very committed partners. Hoping for more chapters to this story! Thanks for writing! An easy 5*!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Well-written story but I would have omitted the shower scene and had Mark join her in bed, still sticky from Gabriel's attention. Also I would have given Gabriel a thicker penis than Mark and got Mark to ask her what it felt like inside her.

lc69hunterlc69hunter11 months ago

There will be a lot for the two of them to navigate going forward, to make sure he is not left out of her desires and actions

Wilson SpaldingWilson Spalding11 months ago

This author continues to impress.

The build-up was well-conceived, the characters well-rounded.

The action itself was exquisite, the moment of doubt very real... and the situational climax was gracefully, tastefully done. The dénouement was icing on the cake - I wish I could read another 10 chapters of the evolution of this couple.

lc69hunterlc69hunter11 months ago

Extremely well done. Very loving, as these things can and should be, if you go down that road

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Well written. What have they opened themselves up to? Their lives will never be the same; and he may end up losing his "wife".

HotdiggitydogHotdiggitydog11 months ago

Very eloquently written. Very erotic. Actually one of the best I've read here. If the story ends there, I'm fine with that but feel there's more to it. Will read more by this author. Very talented. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Another exquisite story from a very talented author. I love that in her fantasies, the men are anonymous, just darling little fuck poles for her to cum on. And I’d be just like Mark, patiently waiting and just rock hard and so anxious to eat the creampie. Hopefully the author ignores the haters. These are great stories.

JT

LordDoyan01LordDoyan018 months ago

We enjoyed this and look foreword to more. More encounter to follow we hope.

Lord and Lady D

shang40shang406 months ago

My wife had such meeting on our Anniversary when her new colleague, a black muscular muslim guy gave Her solid fuck.

This was continued every week at least once. If she is in safe period she used to take him raw. And feeding me the combined juice

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