All Comments on 'Anniversary Surprise Ch. 01'

Great story well written.

captured the feelings well

next one please

Looking forward to the implied additional chapter(s).

One suggestion ... rather than pushinig against resistance every new time, it would seem to me a variation would be more tantalizing. Sometime, just have a repeat of what has already happened, perhaps with a different person.

So good, but this Terry is really a insensitive prick and no good for the lifestyle. Boundaries needs to be respected else it is just rape...

"This is a bit long."

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4 Literotica pages (~30 in Word) is a bit long. 9 pages and only chapter 1 is a monstrosity.

I'll tell you what category NON CONSENT, she said she didn't want to and bitch Vanessa pushed, that did it for me. What a fucked up anniversary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And most husbands would not go for this either, page 3 and done

Very hot and very realistic. This is very similar to my wife's journey into the lifestyle. Sometimes it's two steps forward and one step back, other times it's one forward and two back. It's a lot of fun, but there are also a lot of emotions early on.

Great storey, so looking forward to what happens on the Cruise. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Great storey, looking forward to what happens on the cruise. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

So I'm confused, is Terry married to Vanessa or Janet? You changed the marriages somewhere between page 3 and page 6.

Fantastic story, I hope you write about the cruise.

Voyages of discovery aren't always smooth sailing. I thought your approach was realistic and thoughtful. Married couples opening up to sex with others isn't as easy a thing as some stories would have us believe. It's obvious that their love for each other is strong. I hope that you continue the story with their voyage. Well done, and thank you for sharing.

That was outstanding. It felt very authentic and flowed well. Nice work.

thankyou , that was very realistic

No telling the play that might just happen!