by johnlantone
Ignore all the mean comments. Story is great. well written. Really hope you will write more.
The storyteller , Bill or whatever his name is ,
is an
A GRADE ASSHOLE PAR EXCELLENCE ...... π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬.
Yes I did.
Yes you should add more stories.
All of our comments will thicken your skin to 'constructive criticism'. Some simple blackmail is good for someone else s soul.
I believe Ann will cum around eventually (!)
That's just a terrible thing to do. Your a mean, mean man. Are you hiring ?
Wrong Category: oops, I'm a new member here. I wonder if it's possible to get it moved?
So..I'm an author that wrote a fictional story. ??
Thanks for the comments!
Nice to see her suck a cock. All woman do it. It's only the religious ones who pretend they don't.
Nicely written, but--and I don't say it often--it's in wrong category. This is very fine Reluctance story, but not a very good Mature story. ("Mature" often imply, not only older character(s), but also a significant age gap.)
this belongs in nonconsent/reluctance category since she didn't enjoy the encounter with this creepy jerk. she gave him his one time, next may have neighbor help her down in the basement one more time.
She should have told him to get the fuck out as soon as he started to threaten her with exposing her fling with the neighbor, and if he outed her, she'd ruin him. Too bad she was not worldly enough to take that stand.