by DavidSteam
The plot was rather unique, but the condom kinda took the fun out of the story. Cocks should not be sucked with a condom.
Seen similar stories before but enjoyed this none the less and plenty of scope for more.
Gagging on semen that's on the other side of a condom?
How long must he be to have a wall between them and still slide down her throat? Or maybe the walls are really thin?
Anyway, I'm being picky. Nice start.
The story was good, although there were a few oversights - gagging on the condom, the glory hole unmentioned until fingers appear, etc. I had no problem with the wall thickness, as you had described "bathroom like cubicles" that I expected to be thin-walled.
My biggest issue is that the story part is interesting but too brief. I think this genre of story really relies a lot on actual plot, and yours ended too quickly - what happened after? Did the son keep it secret? Did he pursue the mother, openly or on the sly? What happened?
nice little read. Enough to make me feel I was him, so good......
Nice set up for a good series. Such a naughty boy you have been.and how nicely it builds to story after story about how son uses Mom in many ways..... enjoy the series. Could be very hot!
Really? You call this a story? If this is the best you can do, just forget about it. Get yourself another day job.