All Comments on 'Another Kind of Roman Story Ch. 00'

Not a bad start. Keep writing and we will see where this goes. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

Could do with a couple more pages . Great story

An interesting first page! Hoping there's lots more to the next chapter.

Unfortunately I don’t have patience enough to find my way through the horrible use of verb tenses you struggle to use. Some folks seem to like it, maybe I’m just lazy, but just no.