All Comments on 'Another One Bites The Dust'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 6 years ago
not bad

I bet the girls though they would be going to jail, well I guess it was not their time still a good story

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 6 years agoAuthor
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Yes, they certainly did.

If this story seems short (and short of sex) it's because it is a bit of a "filler". I needed to get Angie to a certain point in her life. My next offering, "Three Times a Lady", is going to be short on story and long on sex.

And apologies to other song-title-users. I've unashamedly got into that 70s/80s rut. So ask me if I'm bothered!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

As usual, your stories always entertain. I look forward to your stories. Can't wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great read

It was a good read. Loved the football angle and the hint that Abigail dropped. So many more to do, I'm thinking.

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 6 years agoAuthor
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Another episode is already being written.

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 6 years agoAuthor
Feedback re "Great Read"

I wasn't sure about the football angle so I'm pleased it worked for you. And guess what: Abigail is going to follow up on her hint big-time.

rusty333rusty333over 6 years ago
great

another good story, waiting for the next segment

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 6 years agoAuthor
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I'm glad you are enjoying it. I'm currently editing "Three Times A Lady", Angie's next set of adventures. There Is a clue in the word "three"! It should be posted over the next few days.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

The start of Chapter 2 - Notts County

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