All Comments on 'Another Random Dick Suck Goes Bad'

Strange, but weird enough to enjoy. Please no sequel!

HP Lovecraft doesn't deserve the disservice you do them with your pseudonym associated with the horrible "writing" you pawn off on us.

REAL WASTE OF TIME, DUMBEST SHIT I EVER READ ONE STAR

Somewhere, in that deceptively creative mind of yours, you come up with entertaining stories. The first was fun, second a bit of a reach and, the third was quite out there. All, however, entertained.

A couple of suggestions are below. No error sufficient to deter from your story.

"shuttered in disgust - perhaps you meant shuddered ? Shuttered describes a window with the shutters closed

"freshly ironed socks" these belong in the same drawer as ironed tightly whities! Nobody irons socks . . . Or tightly whities!

Dick head

Thanks for all the great feedback. ""shuttered in disgust - perhaps you meant shuddered" Yes, I meant shuddered in disgust.

Happy April fools readers. Hopefully you'll enjoy this fun little tale.

Bad comedy

NEGATIVE FIVE STARS FOR BEING A GAY MALE STORY NOT A INCEST STORY AT ALL

EVERY WORD WAS MISSPELLED

I went through this twice and still can't comprehend what I just read.

I felt like this was meant to be terrible as a joke for the readers. If that's the case, then it's a job well done.

totally fucked up.

This doesn't deserve the hate it's getting. I found it amusing!

uhm. It feels like an introduction leading towards the better parts of the story.