by MaryannePeters
Would loved to have read the details of this one. More like an outline and a damn good one, but deserved the intense emotions of him just being a dirt bag slut, getting caught, then the intensity of his change. From his initial behavior, to capture, to changes, to making him disappear, then reappear as a woman, to his conditioning as a different kind of slut, this would make a great multi part story.
I want to be a sissy like that - have breasts, no balls and a tiny, tiny clit - long, long hair.... Please
Shoulda removed his cock or gave him a x-change pill and changed him. Keep going though great story.
I don't understand why you wrote this. Everything is there for a great story but it is so short there is no character development and no plot I normally love your stories but not this
It is good, It has a good premise. But I feel like there was something lacking. Still I like it