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It was settled then. As I plunged into the hot healthy woman underneath me, the one who was going to be my wife, I said, "Louise, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship."
- COMMENTS
SeaChanger4 months agoExcellent till the ending. I don't recognize or feel the cultural stratification that so many authors take for granted in these stories. And this one is an example. True love is orthogonal to the physical characteristics and habits of the spouses, usually bonded by family.
Stubbyone9 months agoWhat a great love story, even though it took place in cyberspace and was never consummated, except for a smoldering kiss. I absolutely loved it. What a clever story line. Your character development was good. Julian’s character was friendly and charming, but that’s what womnizers do. They make you feel special until they’re able to charm the pants off you. Some of the nerds lines were fall down laughing funny. Smart women are sexy. Believe it or not. They don’t have to be pretty to have immense sex appeal. The brain is the ultimate sex organ. Another incredibly easy 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s. Would give 10, if possible. Thank you ❤️
Slider_4816711 months agoNot exactly either of the two possible happy endings I theorized after part one, but entertaining and satisfying.. unless someone has experienced being in- love online with another ( or two like me) they cannot comprehend the emotions that clash between virtual and real loves. Critics, and lawyers, be dammed :-)
justbobkc11 months ago5 stars I had rated previously.
But I really don't think there is a woman in the world who would accept this kind of "chaste romantic chivalrous" love her new man has declared for another woman.
That whole "chivalrous" romance experiment really crashed and burned during the reign of France's King Philip "The Fair" IV. (He was a pretty boy -- not especially "just" or fair that way.)
It was called the "Tour de Nestle" affair and involved his 3 daughters-in-law cheating on their husbands with their "chivalrous knights" in 1314. The actual fallout of all this was pretty much the end of chivalry in real life and ballads and stories. Oh well...
schulz77712 months agoThat guy Julian was now totally different in that chapter. It's not a good writing if you change a character without any explanation.
3 starrs
JuanTwoNo12 months agoSo far in all that I've read from you has been consistently excellent. Not to say flawkess, but excellent anr oerfection are not becessarily one and the same. Pappy7 hit it in his comment below, plus I gave my doubts that the deoths of emotional entanglement the MC and Biff had would allow either one to cone to grips with their real world incompatibility as described so easily. That connection was so powerful that even Julian recignized us translation into sexyal dedire in his wife after onky one visit three years after she had severed their cyber connection and she didn't even know he wa the one who was her perfect cyber soul mate! And still I give it a 5. Why? Because it's utterly unique, dann well put together, and it kept me interested and wanting to know the ending all the way through in spite of that.
16GaDoubleabout 1 year ago...."like a berserk Iowa farmhand". That was possibly the funniest image on Lit!
You are, indeed, a VERY talented wordsmith! Keep up the good work!
Five, well-deserved stars! -Dbl
dgfergieabout 1 year agoLet's hope the beginning of a beautiful friendship isn't ruined buy getting married. Great story, 2nd or 3rd time reading and still 5 stars. Very humorous with the pant pant and drool drool, buster sounds great! The man who lives in his mind, our MC, has learned to see people, especially women, for who they really are are. for all the actions and decisions we tale thru out lives there are always consequences, some good, some bad all we can hope for is they will even out in the end and wind up being being tolerable in the end. You have only one life to live and there is no instruction manual so weigh all your decisions and actions carefully.
Pappy7over 1 year agoKinda liked the story, loved the writing. As always. But... little girl had too much experience being an easy lay. Turning that off, leaving the big dicks and handsome guys behind just like that is a little hard to believe. Nothing known about her would lead a reasonably intelligent person to believe she wouldn't be tempted and therefore lead astray with the greatest of ease. Your world, your people but not convinced.
