by MINKX
I really liked this story and I can't wait for the next part. Please don't keep me waiting.
loved it and i cant wait for the next part! please write it soon!
I loved the characters. This was such a funny story and I can't wait to read what happens next.
I just got bored with Spike and Kiara. I'll get back to them, honest. Sorry, bad kitty I know. Just have so many things playing in my mind...I get on this whole...ohhhhh, lets play with this lil idea, darts into the new concept. Bored easily, new things excite me! Wanna play with the big, bad Kulls a bit. Gonna be yummy, honest!
The whole kicking it on, running like hell through the forest wasn't that fun???
And the Irish hellion girl just got tackled...what next?
I didn't have a hard time following it all, well except for being dropped into the middle, but I have complete faith that you will fill in all the necessary background info in the coming chapters. Anyway, I liked it, found it to be unique and interesting. I'm glad you're back and look forward to finding out what happens next, but I hope you didn't give up on Kiara and Spike. D
I agree it was a bit hard to follow at times. But I loved Katt`s sassy attitude and sense of humor. I can`t wait to see what happens next.
but I did feel a bit cheated. LOL
It was fun to read, but it was a bit difficult to follow at times. Maybe you could structure your sentences a little more?