by fantasyboy
Why did you start off writing in present tense then change to past tense?
It doesn't make for good reading.
Stick to one.
Many women have fantasy of seducing priest. A few priests take full advantage of situation.
I was just thinking about writing a priest-themed story - and planning to see what was on literotica. Very timely. And hot!
Very well done. Not much room for improvement, actually! Especially like the "dessert" at the end, it sounded delicious!!!